Sheesh hun this is amazing. Absolutley amazing.

I hope you are okay. And everythings going well for you <3

Love you sweetie,
// Kals.

Very nice. I like the ending part the best i think. Wraps it all up in a nice depressing way. Great job hun.
Much love,
-A

Eyes + Kisses + Smiles + Everything = Fool ... If that is your concluding message, I like it.

The serenity broken and innosence destroyed is just so keen and full in this piece. You, I am certain, are ravaged by love and torn by the hideous demon of the leech.

Well written, I liked it very much. I find poetry the best way to 'vent' feelings.

5/5

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