Wow! This is really really good. And im not kidding. wow lol.....i liked the last stanza and how you ended it like telling who the person you were talking about was. Great job ashley keep it up!

holy freakin cow!!! another one where you rhymed every other line. that is so hard!!! just please, don't say your stuff sucks... far from it. i love you!!!!

i liked that alot. not the whole plot of it, or whatever, but the whole rhyming scheme of it. dang! every other line?! your freakin CRAZY!! i swear!!! lol. nah, good work. your poems are FAR from sucking. lol. that didnt sound right. :P well. keep it up! that was awesome possum!!!
-nancy