This poem is really touching. It is so sad but I am very glad that he is still alive. Sometimes things happen in life that one can't control...you can only count on God. I think that your writing was smooth. Your poem "almost" brought tears. It is well written.
lyl
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I'm glad your bf is ok . Sometimes we don't see how inprtant thinga are untill we almost lose it/them . This was well written keep up the good work
April
xox