wow...ur really good u have soo much emotion in ur poems .... just like my friends say i have in mine.... keep it up 5/5

Brilliant metaphor/simile/whatever :) of what depression is like! It is like a river, it pulls you under while others just watch....5/5 Peace and Luv Lots, //ari\\

OMG! I HAVE A POEM JUST LIKE THAT! IT'S CALLED EVERY MOMENT, I'M GOING TO POST IT RIGHT NOW!

just posted it. check it out

Very awesome. I loved it.

xoxoRachel