Comments : I can't

  • 18 years ago

    by Anna

    nice write hunny
    hope you're ok
    thanks for your comments on my poems, its means so much to me
    love anna
    x

  • 18 years ago

    by Becky drake

    Listen to your insticnts.............great write, most of us write what is in our hearts, or at least in our minds, so if this is a true life poem, get out now, you said "your not quite right" in your poem, I know to many people who knew that and stayed and it became a nightmare....if this is not true life, you are a very good writer, and you captured the fear, in a subtle way....either way great work, thank you for your wonderful comments on mine, please read and comment on a few more if you have time...thanks love ya Becky