I really feel theres no heavenn sometimes as wel

Good job..lol

I like this one...but the rhyming kind of threw the flow off...at the beginning the rhyming was perfect and then in the middle it just didnt rhyme anymore...but i did like the message in this poem..nicely done.

Frist i dont like 1 block poem becasue it is bad for the reader eye the eye jsut awkward to read

7th line i think a coma needed not a semi colon

i think the conversation with the devil is intersing but should be rhymed too:)

Dude pray in all your heart sure the life that we live on is like hell...sorry it's hell but either way we have also good time...love it keep up the good work (^_^) 5/5