Comments : Let The World Know How You Feel

  • 18 years ago

    by Piper

    nice rhyming and let the world know how you feel is a great poem 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Jeff

    Great message and it has reached me when I am in the middle of the battle of expressing the inner most feelings.Thank you for writting such a good work.Jeff

  • 18 years ago

    by Kit Kat Katie

    Something about this poem i really liked.. good job. You poems are very emotional to me, i didn't find anything wrong, which i usually do.. great job!

    Love Alwayz,
    Katie Schettler!

  • 18 years ago

    by AJ

    Very good message. I really like your style, I'm adding you to my favs. Good job, keep it up.

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Great feel to this peice, and very well written.

    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by AlexJ

    It was very good, I liked the flow and the choice of words. I didn't understand the first line though "wear your concience on your wrist" what did that mean?

  • 18 years ago

    by Nici

    'Wear your conscience on your wrist'

    This line means have a clear conscience, be open about how you feel.

    Hope that helps
    Nici

  • 18 years ago

    by Robert

    Apart from the fact that its a great poem, its got a great message too. Well done.

  • 18 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    I don't know if this was inspired by the phrase "wear your heart on your sleeve" but it seems that way. You did well to expand on that, and I think it worked well. It reads as an encouraging poem about showing your emotions. I have one suggestion though, second stanza, fourth line, I think you meant "your."
    Keep it up.

  • 18 years ago

    by Little Dot

    Super work. You did an wonderful job.