Comments : Shattered

  • 18 years ago

    by sayo

    OMG this is such a good poem wah i feel the same way but in my case its fear and pain that hes lieing and i cant tell because i'm in love and im afraid but yea lol i really loved this poem and thanxz for the comment! :)

  • 18 years ago

    by FlowerThatDied

    Really good poem you write well Keep it up I like your work you could have expanded on it a little more tho I think it was good because it touched me cos its kinda how I feel right now keep it up I say once more xxx Plz comment and vote on somre of mine