Ronin Likes this one.. 6.11 on 6.66 Ronin Scale

This poem subject of a “broken angel” is terribly cliché and indeed has been used too many times. You’ve also made a spelling mistake twice with the same word, you have “chocked” it should be “choked.”
The style in which you have written the poem allows the clichéd subject to gain a metaphorical meaning. What I mean is your poem suggests that a young lady suffering from a broken heart is being compared to the broken angel, I liked this.
The ending metaphorical question worked well too.
Decent poem, keep writing.

Short poem but I think you did a good job on it. Yes I agree with Silver that it's been used many times but each poem has meaning to the writer. Very well done! Take Care! Brooke~