That's a really nice poem. keep up the good work from yvonne tattersall

Tears falls from my eyes now.
What a beautiful poem <3

Wow...
That Was a Great Poem..
Very Sad..
Im So Very Sorry About Your Dad.. =[[ ...
Great Job.. =]]
Keep It Up...
Stay Strong...

-SaraBeth<33*

Sad, very sad. . . but I guess u should face life the better way. . nice

I love the strong emotion of the poem, first it starts from a low point, increasing unto the last stanza.

Beautifully written, wonderful job!

It really touched me. great poem, well written 5/5. keep it up.