really good...i have a few poems about the same sort of thing
I wanna be young an dI guess this is love
good job keep it up
taytay

hey hunni.... its ur bestest friend manfers.... i like this poem of urs... and i am gonna pertend u aint talken bout mihcael... even though u r.... lol..... well girl keep up the good work.,.... love u hunni

Aww very cute poem! Sorry mine was so short! I wrote another and still have more to put into the site!
Best wishes to you both!
<3 M-R