Such a beautiful dedication. You can tell by reading this what a big heart that you have. The two of you are lucky to have each other. I don't know what I would do without my best friend. No matter how sad I am she can always make me laugh! The poem flowed very well you did an exellent job. I'm sure she will be proud. Take Care! Brooke~

You kept a very good flow with it, I think you did very well with this, keep up the good work! 5/5

that's a really good poem i have a friend like this right now im kinda like goin thru stuff and not really happy all the time. and no matter what's wrong with me he can always make me laugh or smile and it drives me crazy cuz he can always make me laugh im so glad that he's my friend your friend is lucky too great poem

wow, it's written beautifully. I enjoyed reading it. nice job. 5/5
take care, marjan

You think I walk on water
You think I hung the moon

i love that....this poem is really powerful! keep it up! 5/5

This is a lot like a song by I think, Gary Allrn...not sure. Great job though!

This is great and and her are lucky to have such good friends :D

I loved the meaning in this poem and it also flowed really well :D

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This poem was outstanding! You surely know how to write, and blend the right amount of emotion and depth into your poems. She must be a wonderful girl to have such an impact on you like she does. Hm, by the way you write..i was wondering, have you ever wrotten any stories? If not, you would be perfect to do so. But stay with poetry as well, i can see you are very good at it. Good luck with new poems. Hope to read more.

-Jennifer.

This is an amazing poem, and reading through some of your other ones let's me know, that it's not just a one time thing...you're an amazing writer.

keep it up.
XxoO

Tim...
This was simply beautiful .. How two people can comfort each other so much without even realizing it..

When I give you comfort
Can't you see
That I don't comfort you
You really comfort me

I just loved this part to pieces ... Remarkable piece my friend

Hello timothy =) really nice peom you have written, well done!

Linds xXx

That was realli good!!!! wowwww :D

~Chocolate Luv~