yo Angie.. u got such a gr8 heart.. i lovd this poem, too.. but it din move me as much as the others, even tho evrythin u sed is true.. i lyk ur words..
keep it ups girl!!

Impressive work i reely liked it =) 5/5

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It is a nice poem you wrote. I just cant help but notice the spelling of dying because you spelled it dieing. It's a good poem and I can relate to it. Keep writing!

Great poem, very well written. i think a lot of people will be able to relate to this

This poems really good I reall like this one! Nice new pic. BTW 5/5

Really* opps sorry about that...

This was excellent, the imagery was fantastic and there was so much emotion and sadness that it really makes a person think. Well done.