That was a very emotional poem. very good. i think everyone wants someone to come and save them. read my other poems and u will learn of one saviour. but im not here to preach. this poem had a really nice flow. the rhythm from one stanza to the other was perfect! keep up the good work.

Great poem. I totally understand how you feel. Nice usage of "thy" very vintage, in a old shakespearin way...if that makes any sense lol. Nice work!!