Thank you for commenting on my poem and yours is just great .It was nice to login today and see some words of incouragement .Thank-you so much

Im sorry ive never had a grandparent that has meant that much to me, but you still got your feelings across...like saying the harry potter things was absolutly brilliant...showed you remembered every little thing and you really loved great job of showing emotion 5/5

Aw, thats so sad. i like how you stated when it happened; it portrays a more vivid picture of the story your telling. im sorry about your grandad. 5/5