Great work keep it up 5/5!!!

lots of emoition...i really like that..keep it up

Hey i luved it..thank you for commenting on mine it means alot ..ill read more of ur stuff.5/5 keep up the great work..
*~*evans*lil*hottie*~*

this poem is alright

i love it, i can totally realate. check out some of my poems.

Melanie,

I feel allot of emotions and anger coming from the words. Good write.

Regards,

Steve