omg! thats horrifing! it must have been so hard for ur family ur poem is very well written, strong and scary i hope it never hapens again

wow that was a very sad poem but u wrote it very well. thats had 2 be so hard 2 write

this must've been hard for u 2 write, i imagine...but it's beautifully written. 5/5 Hope u r ok. Luv and Peace, //ari\\

Really good poem! Sad though..:(

Really good poem! Sad though..:(

Really good poem! Sad though..:(

Really good poem! Sad though..:(

Really good poem! Sad though..:(

OMG I can not believe. I am so sorry to hear that. But it is a very good poem I like it. Good job. But very sad:(

Really good poem! Sad though..:(

I Love this poem. It is awesome and I'm sorry about your cousin. Hope you check out some of my poems
Jenn.

o my that is harsh man. i hope that never happens to any one else.
love ur work tho :o) its brill.
stay smiling
sam xx

Wow! That was a really great poem. Definitely had a lot of emotion and feeling. I'm really sorry to hear about your cousin. That's really sad. I hope things are okay. (",)

~Krissy

wow thats a really good poem, i'm sorry about your cousin sounded like she was extremely upset, must have been hard on her her mom and your family. really sad thing.

~PLP~ lil slam~

This was good, but thats a really dumb thing to do.

wow, thats so deep. your a really great writer, i read about of your other poems. thanks for you comments on my poetry, writing is a really important thing, i just recently discovered i was possible of. keep up your awesome writing, its really powerful!

Wow such strong words i like it

Great poem sorry about your cuz, did she die or just get burned really really badly because that sux. keep up the great writting

Wow thats a tough one to grasp. such depth though