Keep it up

Beautiful...5/5

What a beautiful poem. You really are something :)

-Emma-

I am sorry to hav to inform you but this is not an italian sonnet. An italian sonnet consists of 2 verses the 1st with six lines and the second with 8. An english or shakespearen sonnet consists of 4 verses 3 stanzas with 4 lines and the last time two. so really you have just written a sonnet but in no traditional form. If im honst with you here the 1st 2 verses were good but i found the last was disappionting. Keep trying though u hav good potential

I love it your words flow greatly and colide togeather to make this great poem. Good Job! Keep it up!

I think it was a great job. I really liked it. I guess I am not into having strict form, which really bothers some people for some reason. the poem has to have meaning to meaning. It has to touch me for me to like it reguardless of the format. ...And I loved this one. Loretta

This is great!

~shanny~