wow. brill... i love ur stuff.
ta 4 the comment means so much :o)
keep riting and stay strong
sam xxxx

ye pops.... u have fans... I AM ONE OF THEM!!

That was really good, keep it up!

I love the title. I caught my eye. I liked this poem it was very deep. And thanx for your comment

NANA

I Loved it man it was so I don't know it left me speechless!!!

oh yeah i forgot thanx for the comment.

it was great i enjoyed reading it

wow thats pretty intense for a 13 yr old...u said ur poems rnt as goos as mine i think they're even better i really like this one :) lotta thought and intensity put into it, keep it up, keep writing u have so much potential n thnx for ur comments

wow thats pretty intense for a 13 yr old...u said ur poems rnt as goos as mine i think they're even better i really like this one :) lotta thought and intensity put into it, keep it up, keep writing u have so much potential n thnx for ur comments

nice - is all I have to say!!

Hey!
:Dur poems r v.gd compare 2 mine. KEEP it up!!!

Hey!
:Dur poems r v.gd compare 2 mine. KEEP it up!!!

this was a powerful poem. ur a very good writer. thanks for commenting on mine. hopefully u can read somemore new ones that im working on. cheers xxx

beautiful words here....keep it up!!!

i think ur poem was very good and very touching......keep up the good work gurl!!!

that was awesome, ur a very good writer...jeez i hate the big words tho!!! i can never seem 2 understand them ^^;;

I love that poem! I felt exactly the same way when I attempted last October...I'm okay now and it's good to know you made it through! 5/5 on an awesome poem and an even better idea!

that was such a good poem! thanks a lot for the comment! it really meant a lot to me. your amazing. keep writing
<3 savanna

hey there,
i love ur poem it is really moving,
the only thing that i thought was wrong with it was that some of ur ryhmes were a little bit off, but other then that it was great! lso would u mind if i added u to my favourites? thanks for listening

also u should check out some of minei dont have to many good ones on there but theres a few
thanx tessa

I wish i cud really write like u, cause there's so much ive been through and i'm easily misunderstood. I've gotten tired of saying "I", poems can be so much deeper when their in 3rd person. Gr8 5/5