your poem made my heart feel everthing you meant in it i think u did a great job

great poem nice the way u set it up it was like a daydream but yet so real
Dee

i've given you a 5, very unique with your characters, but the storyline is perfectly clear... and too often very true. keep it up, look forward to reading more of your work. xox

good poem 5/5
thanks for the comment