It is scary how well one person can relate so much to someone they have never met. This poem was wonderful, although sad. Take care.

Wow Ronin - that is really a nice batch of words and so well put and with such passion and depth... I hope your pain lessens with time...

good poem, very thoughtful. keep writing!

wow, this is so sad and a great poem
just like your other poems.
wish you happiness,
marjan

wow thats really good! hey thanks so much for your comment on my religous poem, that seriously meant a lot! thank you