I had a little hard time fallowing this one.. but then agin is could be just me..

"The ways send their chorus of voices."
Did you mean waves instead of ways?
Great way of looking at the waves. Another one of my favorite things in nature the waves of the ocean! Good work! ~Brooke~

great work. I think you write so wonderfully. keep it up.
marjan

By far my favorite of yours. It's so tranquil, and the descriptions and adjectives are wonderful.

good work

Nice title....niice poem. :)

LIS