Comments : Suicide

  • 18 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    Sara,

    I haven't gone over the edge, it just my way of putting my feelings down with pen and paper. Remember you also done the same!

    Thanks for you concern and support.

    lot's of Luv XOXOXO

    Steve

  • 18 years ago

    by brittany

    wow great poem 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by PoeticMystery

    Once again, a grt poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    Interesting....I liked the middle part for some reason. But the entire piece was really good.

  • 18 years ago

    by Emma!!!

    wow well done so much emotion and it tells its own story and you have written it so well and i agree with you that it is better on pen and paper good poem keep up the work
    Emma