this is a great poem. it was way better then my poems. just keep write i would love 2 read more of ur writing

very good poem it sounds like when I broke up with my girlfriend for the first and last time hoped to hear so more lost love poems soon

Good write 5/5

Hey..Thanks for the comment on my poem. =)
I really loved this one, it actually made me teary eyed..you have alot of talent...Keep up the good work! 5/5

-Jess
xXKeep Up The Good WorkXx