it doesn't make much sense. and it doesn't happen to good people only. bad ppl get their share. but the poem goes back and forth between some person and then your life. what's the poem about?

wow great poem!!! i disagree w/ ShAtTeRrEdTeArZ, i think this poem makes perfect sense, and it does seem like bad things always happens to good people instead of bad...5/5 from me!!!
Lots of Love!!
Sarah

For ShAtTeRrEdTeArZ i just think tht, u kinda dont no the situation. You do need to read it a few times tho...

I liked this. I love the repition of the colors. and the second to last stanza was awesome. I know exactly how you feel. Keep up the good work.

Take Care,
Renee

I liked it thanks for commenting on my poem

Very good... love the emotion u put into it ... thanx for the comment ... xox pixie

This is bril keep it up