omg thats really sad i hope everything is ok it is a very wel written poem

wow very intense

That is so good. I love it.

This is a great poem! I know I feel like that sometimes. Keep up the good work! Take care!

Love,
Alley

I love ur poem,Its got great emotion it feels so real.Keep writting.

The same *hit has happend to me, just sooner

i dont know what to think about it eather... it gave me the chills when i read things like this it makes me think... is life really that hard but it was a good poem it makes you think of your own life.

sound's like something i did last week, but i didn't slip, my dad walked in. now i have to see a counsler. Really liked it.
Amberlee

amazing poem..I loved it!

<3, Katie

Hey i've read all your poems and i think there great, in some of them there seems to be a hidden message about your life that u like to share and thats admiring, so just think to yourself that theres always someone out there who will listen to your stories and pain. xox Morgana

that poem was awesome i got it completly!!

OMG! that poems reminds me of a bunch of things i had going wrong in my life. as i sat there and read your poems it helped. 5/5

::crying:: that is soo good i wish i had half the talent as you.good work.

wow this is so good, really powerful too... well done

that was really good

wow how sad, you did a great job writing it though!

Very sad, but a great poem.

hey this is really good. i can understand the pain they're feeling
keep writing
luv amy

omg that is such a sad poem... I can relate to it i guess.. *beautiful poem*
Keep on living...

Shirlz

hey, luv the poem 5/5