an alright poem...can tell you put effort into it...but its too revealing...poetry should be mystical and confusing so no one knows what your talking about when behind it all theres a large message being said...but thats just me...

~~Nick~~

thanx for the comment i agree with wut u say sept i didnt put any effort into it it was jsut my racing thoughts i didnt like this poem at all i actually hated it read my other ones there much better i promise SUICIDE LETTER my favorite