Comments : Old man in the park.

  • 18 years ago

    by BrokenMisery

    Very Original, Keep up the Great writing!

  • 18 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    Dear Broken Misery & Love You Not,

    Thank you both for your encouragement and praise.

    Best regards,

    Steven

  • 18 years ago

    by allison

    Wow, That was such a good poem. I loved it. If this is true, You have probebly saved a mans life. Thats a huge deal, Great job. Keep writting your're very talented!
    *xox*Allison