wow, that was quite very nice.
great job Ian.
-Kit

I once placed dialog on the edge of enternity, and that then came back to me through lifes always changing karma.. T'was a very crimson night to say the least...

I'm absolutely in love with these descriptions you have written. Such wonderful imagery and wording!
Beautiful write!
5/5

Oh, wow. This was honestly one of the best poems I've read on here in a looong time. The word choice was beyond amazing and the flow was completely flawless. I give it a 5/5, but you definitely deserve better.