I would save you Kels... anyways it is a beautifull written poem. I hope that you will get to 50 poems- keep up the good work. You are the only one who can save you. But you can get help. 5/5
we all love you kels. Don't get to high so you can't control what you do in life. Not high... anyways, you know what i mean. Read my new poem, "On the inside". Comment too please. I'll stop writing now!

Your poem is good. i like your style. this poem reminds me of that evanesence song save yourself. well any ways good work!

Good poem... kep em' coming.

OMG thats really good!!! Keep on writing and i will definitly keep reading!!
Love Always Tiffany Heather

I love where u put "save me from the pain i cause myself"
BRAVO this poem is very good..:)

I really like this poem cuz i can really relate. Ive always wished someone to come and save me but i learned you hav to save yourself even if its from yourself. good job 5/5

I like this poem alot. i love hte last line especially. u did a very nice job on this poem. i can relate to it. i kno how u feel. u have talent so keep writing. great job 5/5
stay strong
angie

Interesting... I liked it. :) Keep on writing.

~~Spanish367

"Save me
Save me from this knowledge I know of the world
Save me from this life
Save me from the pain I cause myself" i love those lines...........and i know wad ya mean

It is very good keep up the good work