thx for the commit:) u have major too. keep up the good wrk

You are an excellent writer. I love your work. Your on my favs list I give it a 5/5 Keep it up and I look forward to reading more of your poems :)
Destiny

Mary,

Thanks for your support, you are also one of my fav. writers and I love to read your works.

Lot's of love.

Steve

wonderful write. I truly enjoyed reading it.
I really loved these lines

And a thousand glass pieces the ruptured this tiny heart.

A million tomorrows will continue to keep us apart.

Take care & God bless.

Tammy,

Thanks for your comments which are deeply appreciated.

Warmest regards,

Steve

Steve,

This poem was grt.

I would die ten million times over for one more look into your sweet face.

That part of the poem really got to me. I can tell that it came from the heart. I loved this poem. Once again another wonderful poem.

And thanx for ur comments.

Nana

Excellent poem Steven. I really enjoyed it.
"I would die ten million times over for one more look into your sweet face."

Beautiful line. I loved it. Thanks for the comments on my poetry. It really means alot:)

Oh, very nice...But
"And a thousand glass pieces the ruptured this tiny heart."
I beleive you mean "that rupture this tiny heart"
I really liked the last stanza, very effective ending. Keep up the good work Beesley
~*Freak*~

Aww this is cute, i really like it, it reads really well,
Thanks for commenting on my poems, again, i really appreciate it...
<3 charli xxx ~*~

WOW great poem loved it keep up the great wrk :)