I like it, and the rythem, that was a really good poem!
5/5!
xox Bam

I like it, and the rythem, that was a really good poem!
5/5!
xox Bam

I like it, and the rythem, that was a really good poem!
5/5!
xox Bam

Good work! I really liked how the poem was layed out, differnt yet cool.
Keep up the good work.!

Its alot better then My black world. very unusual way to put the line but catchy none-the-less

Intruiging scheme, and well conveyed.

I love the structure you used, very effective. The poem flowed beautifully.

The way you did the lines was really cool, it added to the poem a lot. 5/5. Very creative, as well.