Hey rachel!! That was absolutely the best poem i've ever read, from someone I knew, oh my nerves, wow, lol Great job, <3 ya!! -Natalie

Great poem! 5/5! Keep it up chiqy!

great job :o)
thanks for the comment- it means alot.
i ll be reading lots more of ya stuff! xx

hey that was great....thanks for commenting it meant alot..5/5

Hey Rachel, I loved your poem, your really good. I hope you keep up the good work, and I give it a 5.!. Also thanx for the comment...

Hey, this is a great poem, LOVE it. thanks, by the way, for your comment, I always appreciate it:) keep up the good work, God bless!

i like this poem ... its very relativfe im sure to many girls...n i luv ur icon...thanx for commenting on my poem n good luck w ur future ones...ur a wonderful and talented writer..
crow

AwSoMe poem 5/5

Hey you're a really good writer i like your use of rhyming words they're really good...keep on writing and thanks for the lots of comments they mean a lot

ttyl,
Maddy

it like how i feel...and how people alway tell me they are there for me..when ever i need them...
5/5

bridget

One word:
Fantastic.

<3 Moe

okay..

Then I'll read some of yours...
This is really really great! <3
Very good writing

You don't need any form of criticism on this, even constructive, you just need to keep writing poems like this, it's amazing and you have a real talent, i know everyone says that on this site but in your case it's really true

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