Comments : We Run

  • 18 years ago

    by Oliver Stevenson

    Oh we have nothing left now, we’re so bruised
    Running along the same old street in the same old shoes
    We all bleed from hurt, we all bleed from love
    And when we’ve had too much to take
    We run, just see us run

    i am a little confused about this verse but overall i love the poem

    absolutely amazing!!

    Take Care hun
    Love you SO much... xxx

    .o0 Olipop 0o.

  • 18 years ago

    by Toni

    Thanks hunnipop x

  • 18 years ago

    by confusion

    mind blowing. truly perfect. each and every stanza was brilliant, the stanza

    You slam the door and walk out of your mind
    Only to find your pain can’t be left behind
    Oh you cry, you cry so much
    Bleeding feet won’t carry you
    You run, but you come undone

    gave such a clear picture. keep it up, lu -x-x-x-

  • 18 years ago

    by deadnalone

    sorry toni i couldnt read the whole of this poem, my head isnt clear, i cant take it in, im sorry hun im sure its class x