quite short yet so much said. very powerfully worded. brilliant
keep it up :), lu -x-x-x-

Mmm. I do like the wording. Much is conveyed. But a love crime? Is this an affair being described, or something?

i wrote it about my long distance rship...a love crime as in the distance and the heartache when we leave each other...thanks 4 ur comments

hey.. i really love the title of ur poem.. n the rest was just great well done mWaz.. plEase Chek out sum of mine if ya getta chance mwaz :):) stephy!

Aw, that sounds just so sweet! but how is it bittersweet?