Thanks a million Cass!

i dont get what its about. what do you want to get better from? it have a good rhym scheme but not content it doesnt give much of a picture or it must just be me.

It's very well written, and subtley expressive, I like it.

wowah i love it..your so outstandly talented.

love it

This poem is fantastic, full of imagery and deep symbolism. It is truly a work of art. Very well done.