Nice poem! I got the message you were sending through it quite well and it really does prove a point. I don't know why but I just loved the sentence:
'I arrive and wait'.
It as very... very much like a cliffhanger in some way, I don't know lol. Well, i like your poem, keep it up!

Gurdy x (GoddessOfWings)

wow this is a cool poem! me likes! well done!

Great poem. Very deep, which i really like. I hope the girl comes to you soon.

-Jennifer.

Cool

That is so deep, and i hope that the girl comes to you, you deserve it hey

Good work, I really liked the whole idea of the poem.