Comments : Living on a dream

  • 15 years ago

    by Lil Luce

    wow excellent again..r.eally like this one...had a perfect flow through out and followed on woderful ..espec love last line!
    xxxLoUxxx

  • 15 years ago

    by stephyG

    hey.. i really love the title of ur poem.. n the rest was just great well done mWaz.. plEase Chek out sum of mine if ya getta chance mwaz :):) stephy!