Comments : Remembering to breathe

  • 15 years ago

    by Lemma

    I really like this poem, ma fave lines are

    stood so tall upon two grand feet
    slowly but surely reduced to two knees.

    Great work, kep it up.

    Em xx

  • 15 years ago

    by Lemma

    Soz, I mean keep it up not kep it up lol

  • 15 years ago

    by Lil Luce

    wow really liekd this one oo! u really are an amazing writer u should be so proud! take care

    xxxLoUxxx

  • 15 years ago

    by Toni

    Brilliant, such a cool poem! I love the way you express all your ideas in the poems. Fantastic! Hope your alright too xx