I really like this poem, ma fave lines are

stood so tall upon two grand feet
slowly but surely reduced to two knees.

Great work, kep it up.

Em xx

Soz, I mean keep it up not kep it up lol

wow really liekd this one oo! u really are an amazing writer u should be so proud! take care

xxxLoUxxx

Brilliant, such a cool poem! I love the way you express all your ideas in the poems. Fantastic! Hope your alright too xx