Comments : I'd Never Change a Thing

  • 18 years ago

    by EpithetPoet

    This sounds a lot more mature than most of your other love poems. Very nice job hun.
    -A

  • 18 years ago

    by Krete

    Your choice of words - confined, occasional, caress, comfort, and ironic oxymorons are a delight to read. I like the incorporation of these dismal little centers of solitude.

    "I'd never change a thing" is very sweet in its whole bout. But still ... the slight element of depression is warry and wise. Delicate and nicely arrayed to meter ... I love it.

    Kudos to you!

    5/5