i dont know why u havent gotten ne votes or comments on this one but i like it

You have a gift with rymeing. 5

It's not one of your best but it's still good. I saw a few errors...but I like the feel to it. It's a change, and a refreshing one at that. Nice.

tht was really good i felt like that poem was written i've been there w/ having to fix my mistakes...great poem
~lisa lisa~