you geve me the chills 5/5 for you!

Hate that feeling, loosing someone you treasured the most, but you expressed it well in this poem :) Great Work, kind regards from Kane

such a sweet poem...great write..you're a really talented writer, girl, so dont waste your gift!!

Love ya, Flo

aww hope your feeling ok! i was really good though!!

~Daisy~

I liked the rhythm in this one, good rhymes too. 5/5.

aww so sad. im sorry... keep ur head high love will find you wherever you are. never give up your true love will find his way to you...
Luv
~*~Ashley~*~