damn chills major ggod one again

Nice amount of detail! Very well done! I think it would be easier to read if you broke it up into stanzas. Just my opinion.
"one loves me except my suicide letter" I think you meant no one.
Anyways those are minor issues. You did an amazing job! ~Brooke~

Very nice and if its true hang in there you will get over it and very nice poem it flowed nicley but the last line kinda threw me off keep writting good job4/5

Wow i really liked it flowed real good and all i can say is you got talent