wow ur such a powerful writer I love all of ur poems, im gunna add u 2 my favs list. another good job 5/5
~*lindz*~

Hello again lol im hyper :D
This was written with power, it flowed nicly and didn't seem to be forced :D thats a good thing :D
I loved the way you are standing up to death, these were my fav lines(stanza :D)
"But I want to do one thing before I die,
I still want to say goodbye.
I also want to say that I love you all,
Then with one bullet to the head I fall."

they flowed perfectly and I enjoyed them :D
Sorry im gonna ramble on but I don't understand how people (points above) say its a good poem then vote low(points to avrege vote)
I for one am gonna vote 5 I personally wouldn't give it a five i'd give it round a 4.5 but you can't do that so il round it up..this was well writen and dosn't need much if any help well done :D

x)

*cries*

Its me again lol. my comment is what lisa said except for the 4.5 rating i would put it as a 500000/5 rating

love you babez
~jenny~
ur gurl