That was amazing Jennifer, WOW! That's one of my favorite poems by you! I love it... Rock on dude!

Awesome poem. i love how it draws you in. 5/5 keep up the good work. plz comment and rate some of mine.
~ApRiL

Like I said sometime heaven doesn't seem real!!

Wow thats great! you have an amazing imagination! i find it hard to write about things that arent actually things that happen in my life or that arent my own emotions and i think its great that you can do that, yet have so much emotion in it. great work =)

Whoa! how awesome and dark...i absolutely loved the ending...u hav so much talent and the rhyming scheme works really well....keep it up!
love ya lots,
sore

Wow what a great poem
keep up your beautiful work

5/5
lana