Comments : Sorry

  • 18 years ago

    by L0KA

    Personally, I think that was a short but great poem. I liked the way it rhymed and the way you wrote it and you can tell you put a lot of emotion when you wrote it. I don't think you are a bad writer at all, I think you are very talented. Keep on writing and keep your head up. Great job. Peace. 5/5

    P.S. You should space this poem and try to make it a little longer. Also, instead of saying "i write a letter to all the ppl who's lives i had wrecked" fix it to- "I write a letter to all the people whose lives I have wrecked. " Just a suggestion. Anyway, great job.