i really like dthis poem it was somehow ( i cant think of the word) "deep" i really liked how the words "htis very second" drew the reader into the poem and made them want to read more i really like ur work its very touching and sad! but i like it! most of my poems are about my life experiences with different things like guys, friends, death, people in general but urs are about sadness and death and it somehow makes me enjoy them!

damn... thats good... one of the best ive read... i like your depth... check out some of my poems... keep the good writting comin...
-sk8er101-

This poem really leaves you wondering what the news was, and I liked the pattern. Great write, 5/5.

I loved it!!! very heartfelt!! thanx for your comment i really appreciated it thanx!!!