omg this poem is sooo sweet, it's really touching and thoughtful. If da parents of this child read it I bet they wud be in tears. 5/5.

Em xx

Wow! This poem is so sweet and sad. It's such a sweet thing that you did. The parents must've been in tears when they read this poem. It was great!

~Krissy

great poem.

awww, that's really sweet! and very thoughtful of you, you did such an amazing job writing this for them.
great job
5/5
-Kit

dats a gorguz poem

it was ok, i dont think it flowed as much as it could have though, but it was still good.
~selina

That tears my heart to know children so young die..This was a wonderful poem for the poems and I'm sure brought them back many memories! That was so very kind of you and shows your a wonderful person!
Kind Regards,
~Chelsey~

exxcellant it made me cry

This is a really good poem.
I have one like it. It's called 'For mykael. If ya wanna check it out and tell me whatcha think.

Clouds n ur Is.

Amazing write.. Very heartfelt and deep.. 5/5 nothing less.. Keep writing you have amazing talent.. xx:

*> : PainOfOne

That was beautifully written poem. Such a sad piece to read, you captured the feelings so well! Take Care! Brooke~
Thanx for the comment on my poem I appreciate it =)

Very good, but sad:( 5/5