Wow awesome poem, such vivid words. I like the ending alot.

Hey, that was quite creepy. Loved the terminologies. Despite the fact it doesnt rhyme its really good, it does have rythm despite not having rhyme :)

Wow.. that was really good, I'm glad I checked out this poem, it was really dark and had great description, I think you did a great job, doing something different for a change is good to do too, keep up the good work, 5/5