It was a good poem, but i do think that you forced your rhymes a bit. i liked the parts were you say he's sweet but scared because people pick on him, and its cute how he would only show you his poems ^_^ oh shy guys are adorable :]

but the way you started your poem was kinda silly "I think I do I think allot" <<lol yes she deos if she has to think that she thinks a lot. so that was a good way to start the reader off smiling.

good poem =]

~tia